This review contains spoilers.
I enjoyed this book. Some of the descriptions are absolutely
brilliant: “He smiled. Suddenly, his whole face was transformed. The
slightly-too-big chin, the crooked nose, and eyes maybe spaced a centimeter too
far apart—all of it became perfect, symmetrical. Beautiful.”
My main complaint is about the pacing. The first half of the
book drags on a bit, with passages that are irrelevant to the story, while the
last quarter is rushed. I can appreciate the attempt to make the story more
contemporary and speculative and magical realism-y rather than high fantasy,
but I also feel like the author was denying what the story really is, by doing
that. The reader is left with relatively little of the dreamland that the title
promises. What little world-building there is still manages to be good and
convincing, though.
The foray into the world of mental health world was annoying
to me, as a mental health advocate, because it had nothing to actually say
about mental health. It would have been far more interesting and meaningful if
Dea had actually had even a minor flaw in her sanity, and it got addressed
during her hospitalization. It would have been more interesting and meaningful
if she had developed a deeper level of friendship with any of the other mental
health patients. The only existing message about mental health patients is
this: They’re normally petty, but sometimes they’re not.
And then this isn’t exactly a plot hole, but it’s something
that never gets addressed: When Odea and her mother performed the body-swap and
escaped into the modern world, did they leave bodies behind in the dreamland?
Were those bodies buried? How does Dea’s father feel about the fact that his
wife is no longer in the same body she would have been in before?
There are tension points left over that I would like to see
resolved in a sequel. The king of the dreamland needs to let Harriet move
freely between worlds, and needs to abolish slavery. But judging from the way
this book shied away from the high fantasy label, I doubt we’ll get to see those
things happen.
All in all: 4/5 stars
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